Writing - Camp Fire

MARSHMALLOWS

WALT: Use Capitals and full stop correct

WALT: Show not tell

1. Boy at campfire cooking Marshmallows
2. Leopard creeps up behind him
3. Boy scared
4. Leopard disappears
5. Leopard steals Marshmallows
6. Boys confused
7. Leopard returns empty marshmallow bag and stays at camp
8. Boy see's Leopard and makes friends
9. boy and Leopard snuggle in bed
10. the boy wakes up
11. leopard is gone
12. boy and parents looks for leopard
13. They put bags of Marshmallows
14. leopard comes back

WHOM! Roaring Flames rise on the canopy. Leaves flee of the tree into the heat. Dark tree’s surround flames while MARSH MALLOWS roast in the flames. Marshy land squelches around the fire. stalking creature watch over the boy. “I will be back soon darling” the parent said to the boy. and the parent faded in the dark. The boy Started to shiver as a leopard came in for the food. The leopard took the bag of Marshmallows to its den. It came back with an empty bag and returned it. The boy spotted it and went to pat the leopard. The Leopard liked the boy and slept in Bed with him. The Boy wakes up with delight to find his leopard is gone. The boy races out to his Mums tent crying. He wailed at his mum “the leopard that was sleeping with me is gone”

“we will find him”.Later that night marshmallows were piled up and the leopard came and everything you need to say at the end

The End

maybe of the world

Kiwi kids quiz

I no I didn't Go good but I haven't Watched the news this week
I only Got Two questions correct and they were

Q.2 What milestone has a virtual baby reached? The virtual baby was “born” at the University of Auckland two years ago.

            Took first steps

✓

Said first words

         First smile 

         Clapped hands

Q.9 In what sport has New Zealand won 9 medals, including 6 golds, at the 2014 World Championship?

✓

Rowing

Kayaking

Swimming

Triathlon

Personal Response - Sea of monsters (Now a major Film)

The genre of my book is Adventure because Percy and his friends set on a perilous journey to save camp half blood

this book is when thalia's tree is poisoned and percy has save the day

This book is great so i recommend this book for all ages

Main Star - Art Project

For This Main Star I chose to do A mural
In my Mural I decided to make fence's and shell creatures
Here's are some Pictures of me making the Mural

 

 

Machine Writing

My Machine

Walt: Use capitals correct

Walt: Describe Two characters

Walt: Use the correct tense

Walp, walp, walp, the white electricity weaves its way through the machine. “slide to open” I read confused. I slide the pearl white door open and slowly step in worried about what's going to happen next. I click shiny dark button to let Jimmy into the machine. He pressed a button wham!!

We disappeared into the past suddenly we Re-appeared in the dinosaurs time I went to the wrong time to talk to people “I wanted 1907 stupid machine to interview Robert Baden-Powell” I screamed at the machine. ( If you don’t no Robert Baden-Powell He is the creator of scouts) “damm machine and has to have a cool down time of one day” I yelled  at Jimmy. Suddenly Roar!! A Spinosaurus makes the tree shiver “Wait this place isn't 65 Million years ago we are in jurassic park” I said scared “We need to escape this part of the island

” Then we hear a plane landing quickly we pack the machine up and put it in our bag and race for the plane we warn everybody to get on the plane and leave the island for good but then when we start moving the creature raced out and snaps up cooper “OH MY GOD” screams Gnash. The plane dives up. A Red liquid runs along the side of the plane But we manage to get to the skies we circle slowly around the the island look for Amanda and Pauls son but then something hits the roof .A beak slices its way into the engine then our plane starts spinning and we hit the ground but i had left the plane so i could go to the correct time. wait this wasn't the present it was when Robert Baden-powell then we start broadcasting through time. “hello everybody and today we are interviewing  Robert Baden-powell so how was it like in war” i questioned him Well it was good’ he said puffed .

Half an hour later later.” well thats our interview with Robert Baden-powell so will outro the episode here, GOOD BYE”

The End