Writing - Camp Fire

MARSHMALLOWS

WALT: Use Capitals and full stop correct

WALT: Show not tell

1. Boy at campfire cooking Marshmallows
2. Leopard creeps up behind him
3. Boy scared
4. Leopard disappears
5. Leopard steals Marshmallows
6. Boys confused
7. Leopard returns empty marshmallow bag and stays at camp
8. Boy see's Leopard and makes friends
9. boy and Leopard snuggle in bed
10. the boy wakes up
11. leopard is gone
12. boy and parents looks for leopard
13. They put bags of Marshmallows
14. leopard comes back

WHOM! Roaring Flames rise on the canopy. Leaves flee of the tree into the heat. Dark tree’s surround flames while MARSH MALLOWS roast in the flames. Marshy land squelches around the fire. stalking creature watch over the boy. “I will be back soon darling” the parent said to the boy. and the parent faded in the dark. The boy Started to shiver as a leopard came in for the food. The leopard took the bag of Marshmallows to its den. It came back with an empty bag and returned it. The boy spotted it and went to pat the leopard. The Leopard liked the boy and slept in Bed with him. The Boy wakes up with delight to find his leopard is gone. The boy races out to his Mums tent crying. He wailed at his mum “the leopard that was sleeping with me is gone”

“we will find him”.Later that night marshmallows were piled up and the leopard came and everything you need to say at the end

The End

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