Wednesday 23 March 2016

Camp Descriptive Writing - Angus

Hello everybody.
This piece of writing is about my awesome trip to Curious cove in the Marlborough sounds.
I hope you enjoy!

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  1. Unknown23 March 2016 at 12:28

    Hi ANGUS
    Great post but you could get a pick of a flying fox next time but still really good.

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  2. Unknown5 April 2016 at 12:18

    Hi Angus,

    Great post! I think that when you said: 'My gut instinct is to hold on to the rusty chains and scream.' I thought was quite funny.
    Do you how long the flying fox took you to get to the bottom and how long the flying fox is?
    Anyway, great post!
    Griffin

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