Wednesday 27 August 2014

MarshMallows Bare Bones

WALT: Create a Bare Bones Plan

  1. Boy at campfire cooking Marshmallows
  2. Leopard creeps up behind him
  3. Boy scared
  4. Leopard disappears
  5. Leopard steals Marshmallows
  6. Boys confused
  7. Leopard returns empty marshmallow bag and stays at camp
  8. Boy see's Leopard and makes friends
  9. boy and Leopard snuggle in bed

7 comments:

  1. Hi Angus,
    It's funny how they become friends even though the leopard stole the marshmallows
    How did the leopard fit in the bed when it is so big?
    Kaif

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    1. Hi Kaif
      The Boy was so lucky that he had a large king bed so the leopard could fit in

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  2. Wow Angus, this leopard must be very friendly, or he really loves marshmallows!!! What do you think???
    Nana

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    1. Hi Nana In my story he really loved marshmallows and he was friendly

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  3. Oh No Angus I would be scared too... I seriously could not have a leopard in my bed but Poss can surely share with me..

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    1. Hi brenda I think that having poss sleeping with you would be cool but i would not sleep with a leopard as well

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  4. I think Leopards are a cool big cat. Do you think that they like marshmallows?

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Thank-you for your positive, thoughtful, helpful comment.