Kaos' (It is Pronounced Chaos) Returns
WALT: Show not tell
Paragraph 1 The Opening
“Welcome Everyone to the official Opening to the new Skylands Academy.Cali And Flynn Will you do the honors” Announced Buzz. Schwick the red ribbon fell to the ground softly. Wallop and WildFire ran up to do there speach. “All us Skylanders Know that protecting the world is hard but all the skylands is safe now we train for what's coming our way” Wallop Announced.
Paragraph 2 Kaos’ return
Meanwhile Koas (Remember It is Pronounced Chaos) is stealing all the traptanium from inside the Academy. “MWAHAHAHAHA” Kaos howled as the wall crumbled into an opening. GlumShanks and kaos escape in their plane
Paragraph 3 Reaconnising
“Hey Where is all my traptanium?” yelled Buzz “I bet you kaos has been here. Hey lets get those machines out take down this kaos”. “Ok and I will get the giant bot” Said Mags. “HAHA skylosers” said kaos “we will be destroying your portal master soon”. WHAM! “what was that” flynn yelled “we have ambushed” buzz yelled “ Robot take them down” Whoosh bam! bam!
Paragraph 4 Ultra Kaos
“HAHAHA” Kaos yells in his now deep deep voice “I will soon be ul ul ultra tra tra tra Traptanium s s s soon. Wait wait why am i” shwing shwing “HAHAHA” kaos yelled “Watch out portal master.For your doom”
Paragraph 5 The Final Battle
Wallop and Wildfire make there way to the top platform traptaniumn
sword fly at them as they enter the arena “HAHAHA FOOLS” kaos screamed at them doom sharks.
sword fly at them as they enter the arena “HAHAHA FOOLS” kaos screamed at them doom sharks.
“Dodge them wallop for hit them back” WildFire shouted. Smash! Smash! Smash! “how dare you throw sharks at me. wait the traptatium wheres its gone NOOOOO!!!” said Kaos. Pow!
Paragraph 6 Skylands is Safe
“Ha thought that would work” Buzz shouted Now just trap that hellboy. ?” stay back swirly thing!” said kaos “I don’t want to be a toooooyyyyy”
The End
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